week 4 2018

“I wonder if the window cleaning is easily manageable?” Dad questioned as we looked the elegant building.

“Do you think that the occupants of the local area are bothered by the private helicopters that have a high frequency of landing on the building?” Asked mom.

“I don’t know. Do you think that the CEO of the building is a haughty person.” The little boy responded

“Well because you’re on probation from electronics, so I think we should go to the park.” The mom said to the little boy

One thought on “week 4 2018”

  1. Hi Aiden,

    I really like the way you’ve made the whole story a conversation- this is quite unique and creative! You’ve also done it very accurately. Your use of adjectives like haughty and elegant is interesting and helps improve your story- well done.

    Thanks for taking part in 100WC this week.
    Hannah (Team 100) -Birmingham, UK

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